8.11.2009
The interview exprience
Yesterday I didn't come to school, because I felt sick.Teacher brought my classmates to Reffices city . They interviewed someone who we didn't know.I though it was difficult to me. I'm so timid. I always don't know how to speak with a strange person. But it was a good chance, We can practice our speaking and listing. It was difficult to start , don't be shy.If you smile and look like friendly, people would like to speak with you . You should listen carefully and answer to them. Don't to be solemn. In the end ,we should say thank you to the people.
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Hi Hyacinth, I have bracketed the areas that you need to re-look and correct. The lines mean you have missed out word/words. Please correct and email to me. Please indicate that it is a correction by writing "YOUR NAME - INTERVIEW CORRECTION" as the title of the email.
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Yesterday I didn't (come) to school, because I felt sick. ___ Teacher (brought) my classmates to Reffices city . They interviewed (someone who we didn't know.) I (though it was difficult to me.) I'm so timid. I always don't know how to speak with (a strange person). But it (was) a good chance; I (can practice our) speaking and (listing.)
______ It was difficult to start, (don't) be shy. If you smile and look (like) friendly, people would like to speak with you . You should listen carefully and answer (to) them. Don't (to) be solemn. In the end ,we should say thank you to the people.