7.21.2009

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This is a little fox,they call the pup.When the pup was about two weeks ago,Their mother move them to new den.But had one pup lost.He didn't know how to do.He look at allover the places, but his mother didn't in here.He was so scared.At this time ,he looked at tiger's mother took his little children.He missed his mother and brother.However,he must to be independence.

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This is a little fox,they call pup.When the pup were about two weeks ago .Their mother move them one by one to new den.But had one pup lost.He didn't know how to do.He found at all places,but his mother wasn't here.At this time ,he looked at tiger's mother took his children.He was crying.He didn't want to be alone.He missed his mother and brother.However,he must to be independence.

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  1. Correction by Shan

    These are puppy foxes. When they were about two weeks old, their mother moved them one by one to a new den. But one of the pups got lost. It didn't know how to get back home. It looked everywherea, but couldn't find its mother. Then, it saw a tiger's mother with her children. The pup began crying. It didn't want to be alone. It missed its mother and siblings.

    However, it has to become independent.

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